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6/14/09 Setting Out – TOH Chapter 18

By Flak | Proceed to Story | Comments: 7

Another Sunday, another chapter of Tundra of Heroes.

This chapter came together quickly. The first bit was written a while back, around the time I finished Chapter 17 in May, and I didn’t work on it for a while, but then I wrote the rest of the chapter speedily once I got going. It’s another A-B chapter, this time featuring Ynthon first and Grandpa Snow second.

One thing I realized as I was writing this is that I’ve been giving way more of Jung’s perspective than Ynthon’s in the Ynthon parts. I don’t know if that’s a problem. I don’t really have a commitment to one or the other, I’m just writing what feels right at the time. There. I’m disorganized. You have it in writing (punny lolololol).

Another thing I realized is that Jyunor is turning into a fairly significant character, and that I’m going to need to develop him more. Oh, throwaway characters.

Anyway… enjoy the chapter and, as always, please comment!

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  1. Side B is good. I especially like how Grandpa Snow is going to have a lovely peaceful nap! >.>

    Ynthon’s side is fine this time, but I feel like something should really *happen* next chapter. Mind you, it’s sort of set up for that, so shouldn’t be a problem.

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    Karamazov — 6/14/09 @ 6:33 pm | #Link |

  2. @Karamazov: Hahaha, you like it, huh. And yeah the next Ynthon installment is going to have fireworks. I don’t know if that’ll happen next chapter, though—I’m thinking of next chapter being entirely focused on the archaeologists.

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    Flak — 6/14/09 @ 9:14 pm | #Link |

  3. Might be a good idea. It would be a bit strange to have Ynthon’s adventures going on while Intra is dying or having a heart attack or whatever.

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    Karamazov — 6/14/09 @ 11:45 pm | #Link |

  4. If Grandpa Snow is dead in the next chapter, I’m seriously punching you the next time I see you. Which would probably be next FanimeCon, but whatever.

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    Jason — 6/15/09 @ 10:34 pm | #Link |

  5. @Jason: We shall see. Thanks to you I have a very clear idea of how Chapter 19 is going to open, now, so thanks!

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    Flak — 6/15/09 @ 10:41 pm | #Link |

  6. Flak hates old people.

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    spambot — 7/22/09 @ 11:28 am | #Link |

  7. @spambot: uh… quite the contrary…

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    Flak — 7/22/09 @ 5:48 pm | #Link |

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