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1/6/08 Trial and Conviction - TOH Chapter 10

By Flak | Proceed to Story | Comments: 4

5000 words. I could have made this into two chapters and not had dead weekends… but eh, what happened, happened, as Jeuni discovers this chapter.

I think I did an okay job of wrapping up the two plot lines (yes, there have been two this whole time…) and hopefully there’s still some surprise left in this chapter. Enjoy and, as always, please comment! Next weekend will see the epilogue, and then I will get started on kicking the story into shape.

Here’s the link to .rtf downloads for you monitor haters: Tundra of Heroes downloads

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  1. So that"s it then, ehĶ? I probably should have expected this. It shouldn"t be this big of a shock to meĶ and the way he turned her down. I should have realized that they never would have had anything more than what they did. The fact that they admitted to how they felt wasĶ that was really good closure, I suppose. The dark god god what he deserved, but somehow, it still seems as if there should have been something moreĶ I think that something more is going to be in the epilogue. I can feel it.

    This has been a privilege to read, Flak. I am so glad that I"ve been here to see this from beginning to end. Now I just need to go back and comment on all those chapters I missedĶ

    Alar — 10/30/08 @ 8:00 am | #Link | Reply

  2. Thanks for your support this whole time. Having more readers would of course be nice, but it"s been a fun ride with just you alone :)

    We talked; I"m glad you were both surprised and pleased. I hope the epilogue doesn"t disappoint. Thanks again, Alar~

    Flak — 10/30/08 @ 8:02 am | #Link | Reply

  3. Alar alone? Alar alone?!? Your good friend Karamazov just read it less than half a year after it was written. I likewise am hoping for "something more" in the epilogue.

    Karamazov — 10/30/08 @ 8:02 am | #Link | Reply

  4. It was Alar alone for a very long time :P

    Thanks Karamazov. Got any thoughts or feedback, specific or general? I"m still working on improving this (I"m caught in the mire of Chapters 3-5 right now, as it happens). Also, if you are looking for "something more"—there will be more stories related to this one, I have decided. Two more of this length, and then two shorter ones. Should flesh things out a bit.

    Flak — 10/30/08 @ 8:02 am | #Link | Reply

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