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12/6/07 Tundra of Heroes Prologue REDUX

By Flak | Comments: 5

I just out and rewrote the “meh/awful” prologue of Tundra of Heroes. It’s needed it from the beginning really due to quality things, but then there’s also that I did some research and found that the so-called tundra the speaker described couldn’t possibly be a tundra.

If you want to read the new prologue (which you should if you’re reading ToH), it’s here. If you want to read the old one… well, screw you. I’m also not providing a link to downloads. This isn’t a full release. I’m not doing the works. This is a mini-update with a bit of a news flash.

It goes like this: prologue rewritten, Chapter Eight completed. ToH 08 will be posted this Sunday just as planned. It’s a fairly epic chapter compared to its predecessors in terms of what the reader learns… eh. I won’t let too many cats out of the bag. Basically, I’m super happy because writing ToH 08 helped me finally wrap my mind around what I was trying to do with the story. Direction, hell.

I have direction now.

EDIT: Prologue edited a tiny bit. A typo fixed, thanks to Alar, and thanks to his advice I may have just avoided a prologue that could give away 70% of the plot with a few sentences. Thanks Alar! Woot~

EDIT 2: In case you’re one of those people (KCG, Alar, myself) who had a comment on the previous prologue, I deleted them all. We’re starting fresh since none of the old comments really apply to the new prologue. So… yeah, if ($wanttocomment == ‘yes’) { can_has_comments(); }.

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  1. How long till you finish the Tundra of Heroes theme music?

    KingCrazyGenius — 12/7/07 @ 9:37 pm | #Link | Reply

  2. And don’t forget the promo video!

    Alar — 12/8/07 @ 9:36 pm | #Link | Reply

  3. @KCG: I’m letting a friend handle that.
     
    @Alar: once I’ve got the theme music, I plan on doing that. Seriously.

    Flak — 12/9/07 @ 8:44 am | #Link | Reply

  4. Wait, really?

    KingCrazyGenius — 12/12/07 @ 5:29 pm | #Link | Reply

  5. Sure why not?

    Flak — 12/12/07 @ 5:36 pm | #Link | Reply

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