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8/19/07 Legend of the Frozen South - TOH Chapter 02

By Flak | Proceed to Story | Comments: 4

Jeuni Huros.

The town of Jeuni Huros.

The dreams of Jeuni Huros.

The girl he meets and the truth he learns.

An invitation is an invitation, but drunks are mere mortals.

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  1. When I read this, the little girl kind of intruiged me. There was the initial, "ROFFLE LOLI" but then I had to think about it a bit. The unwanted truth, the song, and how it all seemed to be related to himĶ I suppose this would really pique the interest of someone who likes unanswered mysteries. (It did for me) The fever led me to believe that the story would turn in a different direction, but I was shot down by your lovely luring loli lullaby.

    Alar — 10/30/08 @ 10:25 am | #Link | Reply

  2. If you don"t mind me asking, what "different" direction were you led to believe the story would turn? The thoughts people have when reading these things interest me a great deal, as they well should.

    Flak — 10/30/08 @ 10:25 am | #Link | Reply

  3. Well, I certainly didn"t expect Kihara. You had mentioned a loli entering, but I didn"t think she would enter at this point. Even if I did, I didn"t expect her to turn out the way you wrote her. I think I expected more from the beast-man, but nothing specific.

    Alar — 10/30/08 @ 10:26 am | #Link | Reply

  4. Mmm, your expectations shouldn"t be completely sundered then. It"s not like his role in the story is over; even in this chapter while dead, he affects Jeuni and Jeuni"s actions quite heavily.

    Flak — 10/30/08 @ 10:29 am | #Link | Reply

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