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Author: Flak
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So maybe I am stranded in this icy wasteland...
Mr. Jeuni Huros, stagnant juggler and drunk, in killing a mysterious traveler, creates himself a future... a future he at once needs and fears.
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I"m going to take a guess that the first half (ish) wasn"t rewritten, or if it was it wasn"t rewritten much? It seems as if the style of the prologue and the style of the first chapter"s first half vary quite a bit. Other than noticing this, I found it interesting enough to keep reading. I"d have to think pretty hard on how the first half doesn"t seem like your usual writing style, either in other stories, HC, or this, but that would take a significant amount of time. Moar plz.
Alar — 10/30/08 @ 10:51 am | #Link | Reply
This entire chapter was touched with revisionĶ I don"t know what"s wrong with your perception :P
Anyway, differences in style exist. The narrator"s voice hasĶ well, voice, for instance. There"s some kind of less-than-monotone aspect to the narration. I don"t really know how to describe it but the essence of the differences lies in the first paragraph of this chapter. There"s something less than serious in the narration. I think.
Flak — 10/30/08 @ 10:51 am | #Link | Reply